Posted: Jan 28, 2013 9:48 am
MattHunX wrote:Animavore wrote:My pome.Who thought that chucking rocks from a crooked tower
Would help shift a whole planet from its galactic centre?
As quick as a flash with descriptive, predictive power
A kettle takes longer to boil to a far flung observer.
Eve wasn't created by a guy with a great white beard,
He neatly nestled her in a nested hierarchy
Though not as regal ruler rather a monkey's peer,
An elucidation so disturbing it implies anarchy.
A proto-cyborg announces the demise of philosophy.
A fallen perfect world is the gods' delusion.
Or however above you want to affix the apostrophe,
Universal wonders are such profound profusion
I find it neither disheartening or embarrassing
Our blue-dot pales in significance in comparison.
FIFM.
I think that flows a bit better. This poetry writing is fun, though I'm not givingup my day-job as barstool technician
