Posted: Feb 14, 2013 3:15 pm
by Aern Rakesh
Ironclad wrote:It's Valentines Day & I need a sweet poem to write in this card, it's for a girl who is probably too young for me. Her father would chase me down the road if he knew I was his age.
Any ideas?


Does she know you are interested? If she does and she's okay with it, three short lines written composed by you would more than suffice. Doesn't have to be a 'proper haiku', it just has to express what you feel, if possible in a way that isn't 'icky', if you know what I mean.

Along the lines of:

Thinking of you
makes me smile (etc.)

From my POV your own heartfelt sentiments would mean much more than someone else's poetry.

Think of an image that encapsulates what you feel and express it, as I said, in simple sentences.

:cheers: