Posted: Aug 13, 2012 8:24 pm
The consensus seems to be that this piece of pulp isn't fit to wipe a baboon's bottom with, let alone waste your time actually reading it. It's bad, derivative fanfic elevated to a status far beyond its level of literary competence, and the sex scenes are described in a manner that would probably put an intelligent woman off sex, rather than arouse her. You could probably write something better whilst sitting on the toilet.