Posted: Apr 08, 2016 10:08 am
I find the personalisation at the start of the second paragraph jarring with the rest of the text, which is written in a more matter of fact manner. I would redraft that first sentence along the following lines.
In this volume, the observations are based from extensive reading and re-reading of the entire collection of Gospels and Epistles, in order to gain insight into Christianity, and the religion of Jesus.
In this volume, the observations are based from extensive reading and re-reading of the entire collection of Gospels and Epistles, in order to gain insight into Christianity, and the religion of Jesus.